We love writing at Miriam Lord and we already share our great writing with each other. What if we could share our writing with schools all around the world? Well, now we can by entering the 100 Word Challenge.
The 100 Word Challenge is a weekly creative writing challenge for children under the age of 16. Each week a prompt is given, which can be a picture or some words that you then have to write about, using no more than 100 words. You post your entries on our blog and then they are linked to the 100 Word Challenge blog with all the entries from the other schools.
This week the prompt is a picture…
Think about how you might use this giant wasp in your story – Where is the story taking place? Who are the characters in your story? What does the wasp look like? Where has it come from? What is happening? Why?
Remember, you only have 100 words to write your story.
When you have written your story (and counted the words), add it to this post as a comment with your first name and class. We will then link it to the 100 Word Challenge blog. Click on this link to read some entries, Week 17, that have already been entered http://100wc.net
Good luck!
The buzzing was growing louder as the light from the forest sky was beginning to fade. Shadows from the towering trees danced around him, creating a carousel of colour. He stopped, and gazed into the dark distance. Were his eyes tricking him? Or could he see flashes of bright yellow beaming out of the black night?
He edged anxiously forwards, with the sound of buzzing now deafening in his ears. It couldn’t be! Tall powerful wings came into view, attached to a body as a large as a house. The creature turned slowly towards him and their eyes met.
In the garden, there was a buzzing sound that came louder and louder until the sound stopped. Jake went inside to have a glass of water untill the sound started again this time Jack went closer to see what was buzzing and then he saw a wasp that came from nowhere he went slightly closer and then the wasp stung Jake then flew away. Jake ran as fast as he could till he came to a halt because the wasp went went to his tree. Jake caught a glipse of the wasp and it had beaming yellow stipes and pitch black stipes and ran home.
I was playing football in the park on a very hot day and i heard a buzzing noise, i heard it once and i ignored it, i heard it again and it came louder and louder. I looked that way and i saw a enormous bumble bee and it came my way is was yellow and black and going round in circles. The ice cream van came and i went to get a ice cream i was having a ice cream and the bumble bee came again, it chased me and my friends all around the park and i eventually the bumble bee flew away. Later me and my friends went home.
One sunny day,i was sitting in the beautiful flower garden.As i was eating my chocolate coverd strawberries, i heard a very loud buzzing noise. And i wondered how can a small bee or wasp have a big loud buzzing sound then i got up to see if children were being up to mischieve but they were not.There was a big grumble on the ground everything shook i did not know how i happened but i thought it might be an earthquake.But it wasn’t there it was i rubbed my eyed twice to see if i was dreaming but NO!It was big it was huge it was yello and black and i knew it was a gaint buzzing bee.I ran away as fast as i could panting and scraming for everyone to hear but they were out farming on the countryside my mummy was baking me some muffins and she did not hear me.
My mum came to call me with a hot baking tray in her hand but luckly she was wearing oven gloves
sorry i could not finish it of
Bye Misbah.Jabeen
Bradford Moor Primary School Yr6
BYE
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Everyone thinks bees are scary but in this story your in for a surprise.
Once ther was a girl who hated animals espcially bees no matter what she hated them. The girls name was Jessica she lived with her mum.But one day she found herself alone in the house she looked everywhere but she couldn’t find her mum. She went into the kitchen to get some brekfast and their on the table was a giant bee.She wanted to scream but no sound came.The bee stared at Jessica,she stared back.She found out that the bee could talk,the bee was freindly,they both sat down and had a chat “Help” Jessica screamed her mum came running it was all a dream.
This is a good effort Awaba and I am highly impressed with your punctuation in particular.
Awaba you are right lots of poeple are scared of bees.
Are you going to try the 100 Word Challenge Muskan? I’m sure you could do a great job.
yes Mrs Stones i am going to to the 100 word challenge and i will try my best.
One day i lookedup a giant wasp flew uot from the sky, in Bradford.
There was a man controlling the wasp.
The wasp looked liked a spider but with a sting and fethers on it but unfortunetly the bee took my laptop and i tried to take it away but in stead it stung me on the arm.
Well done Awaba for being the first pupil to tackle the 100 Word Challenge. I really like how you describe the fact that Jessica wants to scream but can’t which tells me she must be feeling very terrified.
Hello Awaba,
Well done, Awaba. You were able to keep your story close to the 100 word limit and certainly added a nice twist at the end of the story. A talking, friendly bee certainly wasn’t what I was expecting.
I hope you keep writing for the 100WC.
@RossMannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher, NSW, Australia
Saturday afternoon in our house as usual my brothers were hogging the play station .whilst my dad was watching television and mum was in the kitchen cooking and calling me to come and lay the table .As I was getting the plates I tripped on something.The plates dropped onto the tiles and my head hit the floor,I fell unconcious.In my unconcsness ,dream I dreamt I was at my cousins house getting some honey from the trees with my cousins ,.We got the last bit of honey and a huge bumbel bee stung me ,I fell down onto the farm.Then I woke up in my own house bewildredly as how I got there ,my family were asking me are you o.k. .Even till this day I can still remember what happened. 119 words
Hello, Sarah.
This was a great idea for a story, Sarah. Having a knock on the head can mix out thoughts up so I can see how you might have imagined strange things while unconscious.
I can imagine the worry on your family’s faces when you lay unconscious. It’s you didn’t tell them them about them about the giant bumble bee or they would have taken you straight to hospital.
@RossMannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher, NSW, Australia
Thankyou Mr Mannell.
wow the bee was amazing i have never seen a bigger bee in my life ITS IS REALLY life like aswell. i wonder how long it took to make did the whole class make it have you made other stuff like it did it use up a lot of equitment
I’m really pleased you’ve had a go at the 100 Word Challenge Sarah. I like the way you have started the story with a description of the setting.
Hello Miriam Lord Community Primary School,
As a member of Team 100WC, each week I visit the 100 Word Challenge site to comment on those entries assigned to me. I hope I am able to see many entries from Miriam Lord.
In order to enter, your school might start a blog page specifically for your stories to be entered rather than as a comment on this page. This way, each post (story) will have its own link to add to the 100WC site. You will find a number of teachers around the world drop in to comment on stories. As an example, I visit entry numbers 7, 19, 31 and so on each 12th afterwards.
@RossMannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher, NSW, Australia
I was at a garden centre and I was standing beside a bunch of flowers.The flowers were all different colours and also they had different smells.I could not go away from the flowers because they were so pretty they were almost prettier than my pretty maxi dress.Since it was almost my mothers birthday I had decided to buy those pretty,colourful flowers for her.I had wrapped them up in a colourful wrapping paper.I then them took them home and I had showed them to her.Suddenly a big wasp had come out of no where.
A great effort Alisha, well done. Comparing the flowers to your maxi dress is a clever way of saying the flowers must have been beautiful!
Thankyou very much Mrs.Stones for your comment.
Far far away in a magical forest lived a bee called Rafi . Other bees didn’t like Rafi because he was different ! He loved to sing , other bees loved to collect nectar from flowers but Rafi not . They said “We don’t want to play with you your different”
or “Go away.” Rafi was very upset by the things the other bees said .
He decided to show them that singing is wonderfull. One day he decided to sing in front of them . When the bees heard it they were hipnotised by him . Suddenly then every bee sang and nobody picked on Rafi .
There are 100 words …
However there’s not much
description sorry for that .
This is a lovely effort Oliwia and shows how you have stretched your imagination muscle.
Finally the spring time was near, the tide was coming so we all walked quickly as possible back to the cottage where we live. Once we arrived we all sat down and had a talk about janes birthday party so we had decided to give her a suprise birthday party when suddenly we seen her friend spying on us and was writing all the ideas we talked about in her notebook and was going to tell her all the fabulous ideas we had. But my neighbour came and said what is all the fuss about when we all shouted she has wrote the ideas in her note book we were talking about for Janes birthday it was on a Saturday and it was close and she is going to tell her all the ideas and it would not be a suprise birthday than not at all, yes that is true so then she snatched the note bookand tore it in to pieces and jane’s friend shouted give it back! The days were going quickly and Jane’s birthday arrived the supried party worked it turned out to be better thn we thought it would be but at the end the cake was gone the preasents were give to jane but after that a robotic gigantic bumlebee flew across and took Jane’s fur coat and made it as his comfy seat in the spaceship.
Well done for having a go at the 100 Word Challenge Ariba. I like the idea of the robotic bee wanting the fur coat to make its seat more comfortable!
Next time, remember you are only allowed to write 100 words.
I think your story is very good. It has lots of puncuation and description. it is very interesting and you have used your imagination.I also liked the way you have started the paragraph.
The sun shone as the wind whistled through the tall trees. Nobody was out to play. So I went in to watch some television. The screen flashed and said “Breaking News!” Then this man started talking showing my street in the background saying “You are watching live images of Albert Street. There is an immense bee trying to attack people. GET OUT IF YOU LIVE HERE!” So we all made a run for it when an idea popped into my mind. So I ran back into the house and snatched some pepper and threw it at the Bee! It fell to the ground and did not move for 6 days and 5 nights! Thank you science I said to myself! 120 Words, It was the best I could do…!
A great effort Alisha. I like your descriptive opening sentence and then your short second sentence, which suggests something is not quite right.
One day there lived a boy who loved chocolate. So his dad went to the chocolate factory to make him a special chocolate bunny. Whilst the chocolate bunny was being made a bee flew inside and sat in it. When the chocolate bunny was made dad brought it home and kept it in the fridge the boy was eating it day by day. Next the bunny was finished, the boy ate the bee and felt sick so he went to sleep, when he woke up he turned into a massive bee “aaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh” screemed everyone and didn’t realise who it was.
A good effort Hafsah. If anyone buys me a chocolate bunny I will check it very carefully before eating it!
“Dad can I go outside?” asked Jemima.
“yes” said her dad. So Jemima went outside with her best freind Maaryah. They were playing hide and seek. While Maaryah was trying to find Jemima, Jemima found a den it was small and smelly.Jemima called Maaryah to come and see the den “what is it jemima” said Maaryah “I have found a den” said Jemima. Jemima pushed the door of the den open when out flew loads of bees. Jemima got stung by a bee and started to scream “are you ok” asked Maaryah. Jemima woke up as a bee.
I am delighted you’ve had a go at the 100 Word Challenge Jemima. I am pleased to see you have put speech marks around the dialogue.
There are some great entries on here Miriam Lord.
If I could make one suggestion – please don’t keep ending your entries with ‘This is all I could manage’ or ‘I have written 120 words’. This is not necessary, keep your writings focused as you can…
There was a girl who lived in a town, her name was Florance. Next to the town there was a vivacios volcano. One day she went to explore the volcano. She carried a knife, which was very sharp, a torch, which was bright and a few things to eat on her way. Inside the volcano she saw a beastly wasp. It was the size of a house and it was drinking lava. The girl, who was terrified, swung out her sword, flicked on her torch. She threw the sword through the wasps heart. She defeated the beastly gigantic wasp bravely!
There is some great description in here Haleemah, well done. However I feel slightly sorry for the gigantic wasp as I’m not sure it was hurting anyone. Anyway, Florance was very brave indeed to go and defeat it.
One morning the sun shone I went outside. Suddenly a bee started coming right at me I quickly ran for it but i had an idea I whizzed past it and trapped it in a jar when i went to the shop I let it go and it had disappeared, in a blink of an eye and it was never seen again.
As the children played happily,the sun beamed down on the playground. The ball was kicked on a tall tree,which layed between the fields.BANG! Suddenly a patch of bees appeared out of nowhere. The bees buzzed around the children causing a mass of wind,making the children freeze.No longer than a second had gone by the children were frosted in thin ice, speeding Mrs langely hurried outside.Wildly she stared at the huge block of ice in front of her as she almost fainted.She sprinted inside in hope for hot water,as soon as possible the water was poured on the ice.The children had recovered and wanted REVENGE! As one of them scurried away a huge bee lay in front of him…….
Well done Usman for entering the 100 Word Challenge. Your description clearly shows how the atmosphere changes from happy to frightening with the arrival of the bees.
Just as champion gardener Jessica finished planting a rose she caught a glimpse of something large and black and yellow! It looked suspicious to her, so she decided to explore more. Strolling forward she heard some wings flapping really hard. And not only was she a gardener she was an expert on animals too, so she walked until….she saw IT! It was a wasp and straight away she knew that it was badly wounded so she calmed it down and solved the dilemma of the wasp! Soon the wasp was flying and didn’t forget to visit Jessica and her flowers……….
A great effort Safa. I like your your use of exclamation marks, which show the shock and surprise of Jessica’s encounter with the wasp. Well done!
This is fantastis i like 100 word challenges.
I like the 100 word challenge to Iram are you going to do the 100 word challenge?
Once there lived a boy named Tom.Tom lived in a big mansion with his dad.One day he was about to set off to go to the park.But when he went to his room he saw a massive bee in his bedroom.He shouted for his dad “DAD HELP ME THERE IS A BIG BEE IN MY ROOM”.But the bee spoke up “I wont hurt you I am just here to get honey from you.They gave the bee honey and the bee went and Tom set of to the park and they lived happliy ever after.
A talking bee, what an interesting idea Kashif. Thank-you for having a go at the 100 Word Challenge.
i could write about a wasp with 100 words because loads of people can make a story with 120 words
Once there was a boy called jack.He hated bees and when he saw one he would kill it and burn it in fire.One day jack saw a bee but just before he was going to hit it the bee spoke and said”do you hate bees?the boy replied” yes because they are stincky and
smelly”.”Well believe it or not we think the same of humans.” The boy got full with rage and killed the bee then got a match stick and when he tried to burn the bee the fire burnt his own body when his mum came he was dead.
Once there was a buzzy bee which , kept buzzing alll day. It lived in the trees or sometimes inside a flower. One day all his friends came and traveled around the world. In the afternoon they went to colect some honey from flowers. In a garden there was a bee hive and some other bees. Some were small and some were quite big.there colour is black and yellow. They have two eyes , two pair of wings and a body.He lived in a village where there were lots of insicted in the village.
The wasp is big and the wasp is sitting in the garden and heard a voice coming foward and loud and i was scard i thought it might be an helicopter.
It was the hottest day ever!! Sipping a cold drink, I sat back to enjoy the beautiful sunshine. Suddenly, I heard the deep drone of an unusual buzzing sound. The sound got louder and louder as I looked around to see where it was coming from. Was it a swarm of bees? My curiosity got the better of me and instead of running inside, I squinted my eyes to look towards the sun.Heading in my direction was a large yellow and black object. It swirled and dived.Its wings glittered in the sun.Where has this thing come from???
one day i went on a picnic with my mates i heard a very loud loud buzzing sound so i got up to see but there was nothing there so i sat back on the grasss and the buzzing sound got louder and louder till it got close to me it was very black it was starring at me it stug me but it sat down on the grass i went to get the buzy spray but when i reached it was there but behind my back and it was after me i went running and running till then i reached a bunch of bumble beez and they came after me but eventually i reached my mates house
I was sitting in my garden when suddenly I heard a strange buzzing noise. I stood up to but there was no sign of anything so I just sat down.Then it was too hot and I went inside to get a cold drink for my self. When I came back outside I saw a shadow of what looked like a giant fly on the garden. But it was yellow and black stripes and the buzzing sound told me it was a wasp. I ran back inside and waited.Is it a killer wasp and are there any more of them??
I was sitting in my garden when suddenly I heard a loud whirring sound like a helicopter.It was a strange whirring!! It was sunny so iI went inside to drink water so that I didnt feel too warm or hot. When I returned I realized it was a giant wasp.It looked at me so i thought it is going to kill me so i ran back inside.
It was a sunny morning I opened the window.The flowers were smiling and relaxing in the flower bed.Then i went out with a drink and i heard a buzzing sound it sounded like this zzzzzzzzz i got scared but it kept on going then i thought to my self what could this sound be could it be a bumble bee or could it be someone snoring it got louder and louder and i got stung by it i wonder what it was then.It starthed to hurt so i soaked it under the cold water and the naxt day it got better.
what a day? has this ever happend to you? please reply
On a sunny day.I went to the shop as i was walking the long wide path.I heard a strange sound coming behind me and it seem that buzing sound but i cant bealive because it was so loud that my ears can’t stand it.
Dear Mr Harrison and the Mariam Lord Primary School,
One sunny morning,I was playing football outside in my garden.i heard a loud buzzing
noise.It was coming right close to me.So i played somewhere that i won’t hear it again.
So i told my mum that the bumble bee was coming into my face whilst I was playing football on the grass.It was massive and there were lots of them on the trees the flowers and on the grass too.It kept on buzzing for an hour.I had a drink of water inside because i was very thirsty. i went back out and i started playing football again far away from the trees,flowers and on the grass.
Spring time was near, the tide was coming so we all walked quickly as possible back to the cottage where we live. Once we arrived we all sat down and had a talk about janes birthday party so we had decided to give her a suprise birthday party when suddenly we seen her friend spying on us and was writing all the ideas we talked about in her notebook and was going to tell her all the fabulous ideas we had. But my neighbour came and said what is all the fuss about when we all shouted she has wrote the ideas in her note book we were talking about for Janes birthday it was on a Saturday and it was close and she is going to tell her all the ideas and it would not be a suprise birthday than not at all, yes that is true so then she snatched the note bookand tore it in to pieces and jane’s friend shouted give it back! The days were going quickly and Jane’s birthday arrived the supried party worked it turned out to be better thn we thought it would be but at the end the cake was gone the preasents were give to jane but after that a robotic gigantic bumlebee flew across and took Jane’s fur coat and made it as his comfy seat in the spaceship.
I think your 100 word challenge is terrific well done!
One sunny morning when i woke up i pulled open my curtainsand to my suprise i saw a HUGE BEEit was making a sound that almost drove me mad .It had enormas wings ,huge eyes, extremely long legs and dark black and yellow stripes!!! I ran to call the police but they just wouldnt believe me, i told my relatives, my neighbors but still the same answe4r
As i strolled down the park i was shocked to see how big this bee was it was all hairy and slimy with all the nectar it had collected it was as big as 1000 houses stacked on each other and he was coming right towards me i stood and wondered what now?
Then i ran for my life it grabbed me i screamed and it took me away to a horrible place and i never came back to my home.
As I was strolling along in the big park I was stunned at how big this bee was,for a miniute I paused and thought this cant be real.I was so scared and It felt like my heart was in my mouth beating so fast.As I ran it got louder and louder and close and closer I thought oh no I tripped and I said please help me someone then at last someone came my best friend Maira came to save me.She manged to frighten the bee away I was so gratful.But we had to get out of the park fast before it came back it was enormous the bee I didnt even know there could be a bee that big I just kept going on and on about the bee because,it felt like it was going to be fixed in my head forever.That day when I got home I went to bed and it was all over.
One sunny day i was skipping in my garden with my sister ,ayesha, when i heard a loud buzzing sound i stopped skipping for a minuit then i started skipping again because i thaught it was nothing but i was wrong. two minuits later i was about to go inside my house when a gigantic yellow and black thing popped out infront of my house
and it was a bee not an ordinary bee this one could talk. when i told my sister she thought i was mental, it was right behind her but she never saw it so i ran to my room and there it was in front of me and it said make me some beens and toast. then i woke up from my horrible nightmare.
One sunny morning, i went for a walk in the park and there was a gigantic bee buzzing around me, I could hear it but I couldn’t see it. It was invisible!! I asked it “What do you want??” it replied “I just want some honey,chill out”! so I gave the bee some honey and walked of for my walk in the park, and the bee buzzed off and never came to me again then, I lived the rest of my day happily!! (the walk was great!!) After that my mum rang me on my phone and told me to come home!!!
Well done everyone you have done a good job of your first 100 word challenge.Not long ago the 100 word challenge was new to our school, you have done really well seen as this your first time doing a 100 word challenge.I think you have put a lot of effort into your work.Keep up the hard work.
well done everyone you have put a good effort
and welll done keep it up
Dear miriam lord school. All these stories are fantastic. But are they true? Were did you get those excellent ideas from. You and your class are very clever like a huge team. From Yasin bradford moor.
dear miriam lord school. All the stories are fantastic but are they all true.where did you get them excellant ideas from. You and your class did extremely well.from zain BM
One day in a far away land there was a princess,who was called Jessica and it was her birthday,she loved it when it was her birthday because her father tells his servants to bake a chocolate cake. In the kitchen the servants were baking a cake and they couldn’t bake it because they got distuirbed by a bee.The princess ate the part which had the bee in it and fell sick.The next morning when the princess looked in the mirror she was shocked because she saw a bee instead of herself.No one recgonized princess Jessica……….
A good effort Nadia. You have stretched your imagining muscle in this story. Well done!
The sun was scorching hot. The light flickered against the children. They skin was boiling but they still enjoyed themselves. A group of boys at the other end of the street were playing football. The football flew in the sky. As the ball rose it looked like it was getting smaller. A whistle blew and the ball flew down. It hit a bees hive. The bees had a hard sting. They came out and chased the children.”RUN”, they said. One boy stopped and a bee stung him. He looked at his arm and he had a spot. He didn’t die!
one sunny day i went to out for shopping suddenly i heard a strange noise that anoyed me and i looked back and there was a yellow and black enormous wasp and it was coming towards me in such a fast speed and i was running out of breath so i tried to escape from the deadly wasp by kneeling down on the ground covering myself with my cardigon it helped me for a while when i stood up the wasp started buzzing again and i rushed to find a way to get ride of the dangerous inscet. I was desperate then suddenly i remembered about the bunch of sunflowers that was in my hand bag.I pulled the flowers out of my bag and i threw the flowers at the wasp and it sat on the flowers then it stopped distracting me so i felt relieved and went for shopping
A good effort Yusra. You have clearly described the setting in your opening sentences. Well done!
One day me and my aunt went on holiday to Miami and were waiting for our train to arrive. I got bored so I went to explore. I found a picture booth so I took a few pictures. The 1st time my eyes were closed, the 2nd one my head was tilted but then the last one came to a shock ,this wasn’t me it was a giant bumble bee! My aunt said not to worry it might just be technical damage. The train arrived so we got on. My life flashed before my eyes. Literally. The train crashed leaving me in hospital. Now every time I look in the mirror picture number 3 looks back!
One day Jack was going to the park. He was playing on the swings when suddenly a giant bumble bee landed in the park near the swings. Jack didn’t know what the bee was saying so he called professor Hussain of the bumble bee university to translate for him. The professor knew what the bumble bee was saying. The bee said “you destroyed my planet and for that I have got your planet completely surrounded” by my gun inventions .It wasn’t Jack, it was his evil brother living in the underworld .When Jack was told this he became very angry.
I stammered to the shop one day looking for flowers in any colour feeling very exited for some reason. The shop’s were full of clothes and shoes but I could not spot any flowers on any shelfs. As I gleamed at shelfs after shelfs for something I wanted for a change at the corner of my eye I spotted a buzzy bee on the corner of the shop window. As I moved closer the bee moved futher making prints on the window because of the dirt caught on it’s foot.I took my last step when the bee flew awa!
once a upon a time live a perilous buzzing bee and he had a frendily freind called Jack he lived in Asia and the perilous buzzing bee lived in Jack’s beautiful vivid garden Jack loved his garden!! The bumble bee had golden yellow stripes and black dark stripes with delicate legs and shiny , blue delicate wing’s Jack never touched his wings or legs because they might brake. One day the bumble bee was having nectar and jack was eating tangy strawberry’s they were very sweet and delicous and jack ate 33 Jack was full up so he never ate dinner or breakfast in the mornning in school jack was very very very hungry . All ways eat your breakfast and dinner jack learnt an lesson!!!
This story is pretty shocking.
There was a little girl called Sophie and she was terrified of Wasps. One day she was playing outside in the garden. There was an enourmous Wasp! It was the size of an adult! Suddenly it’s tummy started opening and in a deep voice it started talking to her, it said “Please walk through!Please walk through!” Sophie had never seen anything like this before. She didn’t want to go through but she was being pulled. She couldn’t stop!
“HELP!!!” she screamed but it was too late she was in the Wasps body. In there was lots an lots of Wasps. They all circled around her. Sophie had hated Wasps all her life but now she was so close they looked kind of cute. There eyes were so googly and there body was fluffly. Since then she was never scared of Wasps again and whenever she plays outside the enourmous Wasp is always out there ready for her.
Can someone tell me who created this bee because itis the best I have ever seen!!!!!
Wow! There are some fantastic entries on here. I’m extremely impressed. Some are exciting, some are terrifying and others are funny! Well done to all of you.
Michael Bradley
Benthal primary school
Wow I really like everybody’s posts.
In the six week holiday, me and my uncle went to Italy.We only went for a 3 week buisnes trip.A man told him where we had to go to find an abandon car showroom.Wnt there and found it.It was old and scratty, the doors looked rusty, the glass was scatterd everywhere.We stepped in looking around.Glass was breaking under my foot.I heard sweaping coming from the top floor.I grabbed a part of wood and banged it on the cieling.It all fell down, my uncle came dashing in and I said “it wansn’t my fault”……