When people take the time to write a post, it’s fantastic if you can find the time to write a comment to let them know what you thought.
When you write comments, try to keep these things in mind:
1. Be positive! Remember to tell the poster the things you liked about the post.
2. If you have any criticism, then write it down, but be positive. Use the ‘even better if’ style of feedback.
3. Just saying ‘cool’ or ‘that’s great’ might make the poster feel good, but even better would be saying why it’s cool.
Comments can be read by anyone from all over the world – teachers, parents, governors, politicians, celebrities (!), so use your best writing skills and try to be as accurate as possible with spellings – take pride in your comments!
4. If you want to tell the poster about one of your posts, then give them the full web address to help them find it – if you’re really advanced, then include a link.
5. Perhaps try one of these comment starters…
I can relate to this
This makes me think of
I discovered
I don’t understand
I was reminded that
I found myself wondering
If we keep these guidelines in mind, our site will be a really fun place to publish our work.
Have fun!
It is really good that we have got things like this because if we didn’t have these everyone will just write a bunch of bad presented work.So please follow these steps to make your comments very interesting and powerful.Don’t worry it is not only you it is me to.I am going to STOP writing a bunch of bad work.I am going to think about what i am going to be writing.You know what they say think,pair,share.If you do not understand that i will tell you the meanings in a more understanding way.Think means when you decide/plan,what you are going to write.Pair means when you talk it through with someone.And share means when you talk it through with more than 1 person,and magpie it from each other..
I think everybody should look at the instruction and make sure that it makes
sense.
That is true you do have to reed the instructions for things.
I agree with you because if I was making a dinosaur and I never followed the instructions the dinosaur would be all wrong.
Well done!
I like the way you have backed-up your answer. Keep it up!
I do really agree with you.
That is a goood comment it is true what you are saying it is a super goood commment frantastice what can you do to make it more intresting not using boring words some exciting words or some doing words like if you was going to say somthing like exciting words. If they didnt know what exciting means then you can do it you have to talk from your mouth.
hello miriam lord i like your headteacher he came to my school first but then mr harrison is in your fantasic school
You are right hassan, he is a fantastic headteacher and he also does amazing assembly’s on a friday called “celebration assembly”. You were lucky to have him!
I agree with you Hassan because Mr Harrison is allways a nice headteacher!!!
Hassan you are right Mr Harrison is a fantastic head teacher .
I think people on miriam primary school have done a really good job on bloging on our
school blog so please leave more thank u
I agree with muskan because mr harrison is aware fantastic head teacher ever i had.
I think you have relly done well and i also think bradford moor primary school and mirmary lord primaey school are the best freinds thank you for blogging on our blog.
Reamber to check what ever youve wrote.
Mr Harrins is the fantastice herdticher.
I agree with you Amina. Mr Harrison is a fantastic headteacher.
This is a good blog because it shose that Mr Harrison is the good Headticher.
Amina is right mr harrison is amazing headteacher.
I all ways be good when I do litercy and numercy and science and foundation and art because nobody helps me at school and home and nothing is hard for me.And asking questions about my book.
I like this blog, Good Comments. If you don’t know how to write a good comment, then you can always come onto this web page.
I agree with Awaba because some people do write thank you but i think this is a great idea to have a good comment so people know how to comment propely.
miram lord is getting better at there work so keep it up miram lord it is getting better.
I think that this page is a really good idea to put on the blog because people who are stuck on writing a comment can just come on this page and help themselves to some information on this page and start writing good comments. I relly like the comments that are on the blog already.
I think blogging is a good way to make comments about the things we learn during the lesson. And it also helps parents understand what children are learning in school.
I love all this work it is amazing.
Yes I agree with you because all this work is epic
It is good to have a blog because parents can under stand we are learing about.Mr Harrison is the best headteacher.thank you braford moor priamry.We also have celabration assembley’s.Now i want to thank every one.
Mr Harrison is the fantastic headteacher.Mr Harrison is the best best teacher that I ever seen.
imy magarason helps me learn at school and at home.
Keenan it is good that you are learning at home!!!!
Mr harrison why did you call the out door lerning spase a hive
Well done year 3 you was fantastic on the samba lesson.Keep it up.
I agree with you because Year 3 are doing amazing at samba!We always persevere in samba!!
I like doing work on my own because Mr Harrison sees every ones work.
Thank you for the best information you provided. I will try
nice site,would be nice to have a group photo
This morning I watched the Digital Leaders of Miriam Lord Primary School talking to Head teachers from other schools in Bradford confidently and eloquently their about experience of blogging. Absolutely superb! Be clear – they represented your school community excellently, you could rightly be very proud of them.
Thank you so much!
Mr horrison is a fantactice headteacher.
I love our new logo it means that miriam lord cps have got LERNING POWER!!!!!!
I agree with everyone,I think Mr Harrison is a fantastic h teacher.
Mr Harrison why did you call the outdoor lerning space “The Hive”……
Mr Harrison you are the worlds best h teacher in the world.
What a kind comment, this has put a huge smile on my face Adam.
I like are head teacher Mr Harrison i think no other school dose give out wii.
Keep bloging miram lord i love tiyping
I think that the nursery children should come on this web page because it could help them with their learning and education.
I love school so much because Miss Midgley says in Numercy I do fantastic in numercy.
I think i like the blog because it is a good way to see how we feel about the school and the environment , also we like to blog because we are capable of what we are learning and thinking what is this philosophy question telling me , about .
I rely like the blog because ther are good coents.
I olsow like the blog to
I hope it’s me I blog in school for guided reading I blog only computer I blog on my ipod and I blog in school in the icy suit
MR harrisan is the best headteacher ever in the world.
I agree with you because Mr Harrison is the best teacher in the world!!!
I enjoy school beacaus you can learn lots of things you can do math and literacy and numercy
I woun’t to come to school every single day because no body helps me at home olso I can learn more and I can go on the next leavl.
Mr Harrison is a great headteacher.
i like mirlam lord is becose you can blog and look at good comment
Mr Harrison is a good headteacher because he is changing the school into a not community school.The school willl be called miriam lord primar school building powerful learners.
I think it is good to have good comments because its good to have comments but not if they hurt other peoples feeelings.
I think this is a good school because Lots of children go on the blog
I like all the teachers and the headteachers because they say that i do fantastic at everything even at numercy,litercy,science and topic work and spellings and times tables i do fantastic at everything and i do good and fabulous.
Saif i think you are very right
Mr harrison your the best head teacher wish you dont leave.
Mr Harrison you are the best h teacher i,ve ever had.
The blog is very good because it has a place of showing people how to write comments without hurting other peoples feelings.
I like the blog because there are good coments.
I like blogging becuse there are amazing things on the blog.
The story lab was exlent and I joined in it t h a n k y o u.
Did u ingoy the lab and did u acted whith it.
I loved the lab it was great.The lab is there for childeran to enjoy reading.
i like the funbarm
I like this blog so much becuase it has working pics and alot of brilliant coments even i like all the teachers anybody agree tell me or commet!!!!
I like this blog so much because thier are good coments.The techers put up good things!
I like this biog so much because thier are goodcoments.
I colabrate to make a foot ball pich and we like are work.
I like douing work and it is fun.
I think nursy has work hard.
Well done nursy thay have worked sooper hard
I like to Blog because i like write
Keep bloging i like to typing
I like this blog it gives me good skills of typing and it is exciting to read other students comments.
I like bloging and i like tyiping
I woud come vary single day
Abdul remember to revise your work.
I like bloging because that are good coments.The thecher puts good things on the blog.
And you have been adding some great comments Abdul. Well done.
Mr Harrison I agree with you because Abdul has got some great comments.
I like blogging the blog because thay are good coments and i like reading the good coments.
i like to blog because some commets are funny
Hi, Mr Harrison you are doing a great job at the school keep it up.
Why thank you Abdul. I’ll try.
Mr Harrison you always do a great job!
People at miram lord primery school have done a good jod bloging for the 100wc
keep it up .
I have left school
i think bonfire night is not good for kids beacuse they can get out off fire and they can die it is very dangerouse. People can have a heart attak beacause off the smoke and some people can die what if they even know and do the wrong way i think is veeeeeeeeeeeeeery dangeourous if u want to do bonfire night and go and do it in the field ,park or where know 1 is near with u thanks for reading beware for bonfire night
hello im ifrah and im from green lane primary school.I think that Mr Harrison is a very good headteacher if i must say.My cousin called Aamina Qazi has told me about this website and its really good
hello mr harrison
is it ok if people from other school can post comments?
Yhh i fink u r alloud 2 post commentz!:)
Anyone can post a comment on the blog.
I think mr harison iz a good head teacher due to the fact my 2 brothers go there(Abdulrehman,3hb , hasan ali,5ws) tell me how good u r:D!
OOPS! i think iv just broken one of these rules.I gave out personal inforamtion sorry for that
hello mr harrison you have been a good headteacher so far because my cousin told me
Thay are so nuch cooments about lots of drifr ant stuf keep on bloging.
hello im ifrah and i reALLY want to move into this shcool
pepole in miriam lord have done some good worck and done some good things and .
Sahil reamber to revise your work.
yep theyv done such a good job
I think the Libary is looking fantablous! I hope everyone enjoys it.
I love the library because it is fun at the library and you can read there!!!!!Its good to read then if you read you will be good at every thing!!I love reading because all books are interacting!!!!
but the library is pink
Reamber to always use a capital letter and a full stop in a sentence.
on art day9 of january mr bulock shoadus how to make clay stachuse I made a horse you hatted to scor slip stick and if you dident it would fall a part and brake.
On art day mr Bullack came to year 3 to mace animalls with clay . After dinner we went to the other class and we did painting.
on art day 9 of january mr bulock should us how to make animals out of clay if you dident scor slip or stick it would get pull of and you would haved to do it a gen we did that to the afternoon. Next we went to the next class and painted ennything we wonted we did this to home time
All good comments has a capital letters and full stops.
In school we have an amazing libary we have so much intresting books that you can read.We have or ready showed some of the parents the libary.They loved it!
In the libary we have an imaganing room were you could read your book in peace and quite we even have other relaxing places to sit and read.
You can never get a better headteacher than Mr Harrison:)
I like the library it’s fantastic and it has relaxing room and it has fantastic book
Abdul reamber that if it is book there is only 1 book and if there is loads of books there is more than 1 book.
I was the powerful learner because I did an extremely super book review!!!!Then my kind teacher Mr Hayslop said I am going to be on the blog.I was very impurest with my self!!!!!!!!!!!
You should all thank Mr Harrison for telling the builders to build the library because if Mr Harrison never told the builders to not build the library there wouldn’t be a library. We are so blessed to have a headteacher like Mr Harrison!!!!!!
On pyjarams day we did fun activiteees and played lots of exiting games but we dident get to go asleep like year four
I like the libary and it has a relaxing room and its fantastic
on the blog there are lot of good coments i love them.
One the blog there are lovley comments . Not boring comments.There are good comments. Some you can make them enjoyable to read so that we will come up with happy things. I ate a dilicouse sweet ice cream. wich says what are you eating.
I love the libary because it is a good place to relax and read intresting books.
So much people like to read there books in the Imganing room.I like to read my book in the Imaganing room because it is nice and quite I LOVE IT! hope you do to.
I like the libary becuse it has evry book that i need and it has ares to read.
I like the libary because it is good place to relax and there are interesting books to read quitly. We have a imagine room where we read great books.
we poened this libary on 8th of febuary. And that day it has been Miriam Lords 25 years.
I love the Libary because you could read lots of books ,by your faviourate authers.The Libary is a fantastic room for people to relax while their are reading an interesting book.The amazing Libary is a fantastic room because you could lissen to storys!!
NO SCHOOL!!!!!!!!
Is school opened on Monday? Because i want to go swimming and i am learning how to dive .
oh yes my cuzin goes swwiming to and im n year 4 and i still cant practise to go swimming
Have you seen the library it’s fantastic isn’t it! It has loads of amazing and intresting books i hope you like them. I love the imagine room because it has beautiful sparkly lights.
I like the piramide and the holl of the libary and I like the imagning room because it has sparklas and I hope you will enjoy the rhyms and the other funny books.
When i went to buckden i got an award for being Mr Harrison,s right hand man
I got an award for doing the best inpression of miss Decciaco.
I think Mr Harrison is a brilliant head teacher because he is funny. He is the best head teacher we have ever had. I agree because he lets us go to cool trips like Buckden.
I like the libary its fantastic i wish it gets more things
I love the libary because it is nice and quite and i expecially love reading the books because they are nice and intresting.Ilove sitting in the imaganing room because i love the little shiny stars.
the chickens are cute I wish I had chicks like those