“Boring!” another Maths test (for the 10th time). “Why do we have Maths test when they are not fun which they are supposed to be. “Well anyway as we were saying today was a Maths test and we were seriously stuck for answers (our mind was totally blank). When suddenly darkness appeared and then light appeared. The light was so bright it started to make us cry. After a couple of seconds we were in this weird place (which we entirely couldn’t name). All around us we could see pictures of Henry the 8th and Queen Victoria. The most frightening moment of our life had came when all these pictures came to life…
I am telling you a story u ain’t going to forget. Yesterday, a inventor, who I call Mr Maniack ( Mr Harvis 4 corection), thought about conciling an dimention that was never discoverd before! At tea time he began. Many failures have occured the day. At last,the answer came no soon! Today, the adventure all began! Psychologist have reported that people have disapeard into thin air! I-I felt I was next…
In the after – noon I trotted along with my friend. Suddenly, I saw the shock of my life! My friend was sucked in a wirlpool! It looked digital! The light was so bright.
It was a hot summers day when the sun was releasing all it had when I felt thirsty so I went inside to grab a cup of lemonade. When I went back outside the light was so bright that the light would make you as blind as a bat.It was so hot that me and my family decided to go to the beach.We bought with us some food, buckets and spades and finally surfboards so we could surf in the sea. When we got to the beach we first ate our sandwiches because we were hungry we then played with our buckets and spades and finally went surfing in the sea! We had a lovely time!
There was a complaint again because of the foolish tailor. The pious king thought I should sought this tailor out ounce and for all. He ordered a foolish tailor Patron. To weave a golden carpet. Patron replied what will I get in return the king said 50 rubies. Patron bursted out laughing 50 rubies that’s about £200.!”No way that’s not even half of the money I should receive. Fine how about 1000 rubies that sounds better. So the foolish tailor began to weave day and night that he had a pint’s of sweat dripping down him. Weeks past by and when Patron was on his last weave the light was so bright that it had melted the carpet. The Foolish tailor had learned his lesson from the king not to be greedy.
Well done to all those children who wrote their entries for Week 34 of the 100 Word Challenge. You really stretched your Imagining muscle to write some imaginative pieces for the Night Zoo Keeper. The Miriam Lord Gems will be announced in Celebration Assembly next week.
Now for the next challenge! The prompt this week is part of a sentence :
… the light was so bright…
As usual you have 100 words to add to these 5 making 105 altogether. What imaginative ways can you think to use these words? Don’t forget to really think hard about the words you use. This is for creative writing so really use your 100 words carefully. I look forward to reading your entries.
When you have written your work (and counted the words), add it to this blog as a post with your first name and class, not as a comment. We will then link it to the 100 Word Challenge blog. Please see Mrs Stones to learn how to post your own entries.
The prompt is open until Saturday 22nd June.
Please also try and take a few minutes to read other children’s entries and leave them a positive comment. Click on this link to read and comment on other children’s entries http://100wc.net
There is a lost animal on the loose and the zookeeper had been searching day and night for the lost creature. It is pink and looks like a ball with lots of purple and pink fur.It has sharp teeth that look a bit like a vampire. The thing is that this animal is very talented and very helpful. It always says it name which is called ”umteedoodle”. This animal is very dangerous so you should be a bit more careful in the city then usual. Sometimes it is a bit clumsy. However a very useful helping tool. It turns into different things such as, a working tools, animals and things that you draw.
If you see this animal please do report the zookeeper about the animal’s discovery!Thank you.
Mission:To trap the Trhino.
There’s a Thrino under attack.Oh no.The gates are opened.Trhino broke out.We have to run until we find him.Let’s split up.You go to look left, you go look right and I’ll go forward.I can hear rattling.Can you?No I can’t.You two come with me incase it’s him.I hear more rattling.What ‘s behind me?Boo.You guys.Why did you do that.Now stop messing.I think it’s there.It’s there.Let’s go catch it.Ha.Ha.Let’s get you back to your cage.Lock it up safely.
EMERGENCY! EMERGENCY! animal escaped from the cage we have to trap it before it destroys everything. It has huge teeth, triangle shaped wings, diamond shaped eyes and it breathes fire. This animal is very vicious and powerful it can run 50mph.The animal can get caught in nets .Call the zoo keeper to trap the animal by putting its favourite food in the cage and then talk grapple language which is like ooh aah kee ree which means your favourite food Is here. The animal is coming towards the cage when it reaches there trap it and take it to the cage. The animal is under control keep an eye on the animal and never let it escape again.
Mission goal: Unexplainable creature
It had been a long time when I did my last mission. Then I was retired. One day when I was watching TV I saw a new company so I joined them. they had a new mission for one person. They all had eyes that have Nano vision, transparent and how to solve things. They had powers too. I got them too. My mission was to catch a creature.
I got a teleporter and teleported to a jungle. I saw a creature and it was unexplainable creature I tried to find it but I couldn’t. So I went back to base and showed my proof but it was still out there.
The Night Zookeeper was in a bit of a pickle.
“Oh no! My lioness has escaped. I wonder where it could have gone to?” exclaimed the Zookeeper.
He tried his best to find her, as she was only young and did not know how to cope on her own. After a hard’s night of searching and searching the Night Zookeeper decided to sleep on it for a while. While he was laying in his bed, he heard an unusual sound.
“I wonder what the noise is?” asked the zookeeper to himself.
His lioness appeared. He comforted and loved her.