whussssssh whussssssh the wind was wild outside the museum whenever a person came in the wind stepped in to making a strong breeze.Whilst I was walking something caught my eye. It….it was a pile of bones well thats what I think.When everyone went to the next room I stayed there staring at the pile. Soon it started to glow and then it lifted from the ground. It had a sort of magic power which made me rise to. Suddenly they started to rearange them selves it made a dinasour.Roarrrrrrrrrrrr Roaaaar.Whaaaaaaaaaaaat do you want? Leave me al………………gulp gulp gulp.What has happened?AAGH
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I love the way you start your story with a sound effect. Even before you tell the reader it sounds like the pile of bones had magical powers if you can’t stop staring at it. Ending the story with a question makes me want to know what happened next.