Alexandra asked “how can I help you?”
“On what, I do not need help stop talking nonsense?, replied Milly. As the earth moved round and round and the cumbersome path began to shake Milly and Alexandra went wooshing in. They saw a lot of creatures and also people, who had got wooshed in too. They had a lot of injurys and also they had said they had been in here for severel years, and a mean king always acts like we are his poor servants. The king, who always wanted inquisitive answers to questions, was sitting on a real gold chair and was beggining to ask questions.
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WOW! You have used some brilliant words like cumbersome and inquisitive. Keep the brilliant work up.
A really interesting and imaginative entry Alisha. I’d love to know what questions the king was going to ask. You’ve missed the closing speech marks on what Milly said and I’m also not sure what she said was a question. If she said it angrily, you could have possibly used an exclamation mark.
Alisha I like your 100 word challnge and keep going on it because when Milly and Alexandra fel I thought i was going to.
Wow Alisha I love you story because you used diologue