At the crack of dawn,I woke up with a startle. My evil little sister painted my face green. “Oh no,why I will kill her!” I shouted. But then I remebered I have to go to work, so I went in the bathroom as quick as a flash washing the paint off. Finally, it came off then I changed my clothes and I looked at the clock. I was late. I dashed to my office I charged through the door. My boss asked “How can I help you?”
“Oh,nothing,” I answered. My boss nodded, he went through the doors. I sighed in relief. “Phew, better carry on with my work,”
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Hello Awaba,
You have used the prompt very well in your amusing story involving an annoying little sister. At least your boss wasn’t angry with your late arrival at work.
Thank you for sharing this amusing story. I hope you keep entering the 1ooWC.
@RossMannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher, NSW, Australia
I LIke your story AWABA it,s makes sence . i like the bit that your evil sister faints. the best story that i have read. well done and carry on the 100 wc challange .you have got loads of punchuation and all of this is good for a year six person.