One sunny day was a girl called Sarah and she was good at her time. When she was tired of going in the atic to take some dusty old stuff she heard a noise. What could it be? she asked herself. She ran down starirs to her mum and said I heard a noise from the attic. She went out to her friends and she started telling her friend Roxy and she gasped. Her friend was packing her old and giving it to her friend called Emma and she came to Roxy’s house and she asked “how can I help you?” and Emma and Roxy just went quite…………..
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Wow!ummehani liked your story it was very intresting.Well done.
WOW! Ummihani I liked your story because you have used a question and that means you have carryed on your learing from our litercay work. Your story is interesting always because it sounds like a convasation. Superb writing from you! Look back through your work next to your question you have missed your capital letter. But it doesn’t matter because when you do your next hundred word challenge you chould improve on the comments you have recieved on this weeks hundred word challenge. But other wise your story sounds briliant.
WOW ! what a super 100wc me and nadfisah are shocked well done !