The beautiful rainbow shone its glorious coulours. But it was not a happy day for the poor villagers.It was easter and everybody had to get the evil king an egg and who ever dosent will be fed to the kings pet Fluffy you may be thinking thats a sweet name but his pet is as huge as his statue and he was made out of the worlds scrumptios chocolate.Everybody fled for an hiding place to go away from the evil king .Until one scorching day when everyone was very warm Fluffy was eating someone he was so tired that he ate the king but unfortantley fluffy melted in the sun.
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Well done Sarah, you are our first entry this week. I love your description of the rainbow. I also like the way you have given the pet a friendly name but then have made it a frightening character.
Sarah I liked your story because you added a great discription about the rainbow. This is superb writing from you well done you also were the first one to do the 100wc. This is part of your litercy. You could start to do comments on other peoples 100wc.
The chocolate rabbit sounds yummy and delicios. Your story created a clear image in my head.
Dear Sarah,
I thought this was a very interesting entry. I especially liked the idea that the poor villagers had to use what is almost the opposite of easter eggs — giving them to the evil king. And how awful to have a big chocolate creature eating you, rather than the other way around. I like that you think “out of the box,” going for interesting contrasts like these. Great job!
Best regards,
Judith Atwood
Wow, this is an amazing story,it was very interesting.I like your description.
Well done Sarah! You have done a wonderful piece of writing. I think this is the first 100 wc you have done. The brilliant part is, that you have been showcased. Well done.
Zinneerah