Once upon a time there was a cook called Tim he was a marvellous cook. His favorite color was pink. He always cooked the king cheese burgers and his singing was so noisily. There was flys everywere around the castle Tim saw them outside the window and they flew in the door. Tim the cook cooked the flys some cheese and onion pasta and the flys jumped on it and ate it all and left the castle king was pleased of the cook and grant him a holiday in america. Tim left the castle and went into the airport and left.
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Shazan your story is creative. Next time you write a story remember to read it back because one of your sentences does not make sense and you have forgotten a capital A on the word America.