Suddenly I saw a magnificent yeti while I was walking down the street. I was going to buy a Ice cream. Behind me was the yeti he was following me. Then I felt terriefied but he was a friendly yeti. We both bought two Ice creams and walked to the yetis home. It was so exiciting because he had a gigantic rollacoaster, a bouncy castle and much more. Unfortunatly I had to go home. I walked home and sat at the table crying. A loud voice came right through my ear and it was my mother. My ears rang while i woke up from my deep sleep.
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I really enjoyed your 100WC Firdaws – you’ve used some terrific adjectives like ‘magnificent’ and ‘terrified’, and I loved your ideas for the yeti’s home. I thought the ending was very clever as well. Keep up the great 100WC work!
I like your story firdaws well done .