Hafsah 5WS – Week 35

Moving near the tree was somthing

Yellow was its eyes red was its nails

So frightening I thought it was a girl with nailpolish

The noise was terrifying but i then realised it was a branch I stood on

Everywhere I went this mysterious thing followed me

Right in front of me

It stood now I was scared almost

Okay well not almost…….

Up it stood straight and still what was this

Something lurking something hidious but what I wanted to know

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2 comments on “Hafsah 5WS – Week 35

  1. Mrs Halford (Team 100WC) on said:

    Hi Hafsah, I love this 100WC entry. I was very impressed in the way you set it out and by the vocabulary you used. Well written. I especially liked the fact that you kept the reader guessing all the way through. Keep on blogging.

  2. amaan6jc on said:

    Hi hafsa i like this 100 word challenge post keep it up.

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