Umar and Jemima 5WS – Week 35

The noise was terryfying but it was my grandma nagging about the TV.

The noise was terryfying but it was my dad who was using a drill which made a racket.

The noise was terryfying but it came from the fire alarm that had sensed smoke.

The noise was terryfying but it was the Oven that had broken down.

The noise was terryfying but  it was  a Clown laughing .

The noise was terryfying but it was just a  phenomenalcomet flying in the universe.

The noise was terryfying but it was a little cat  with a big shadow.

So many noises I just ran out of the house.

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2 comments on “Umar and Jemima 5WS – Week 35

  1. Judith Atwood 100WC on said:

    Good combination for the 5WC! Probably a good idea to post it on the other list. Good job.

  2. Sarah 5ws on said:

    Umar Jemmima this is super but theres one thing I would improve is that you shouldnt start nearly every sentence with the.

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