One day , today, was Cloes birthday. Her mum gave her a tiny green piano. she gaspsed because she likes the colour green. She loved it. But the next day a evel witch came along her cottage and saw her piano, which was green and tiny. Then she, in secret , stole the piano. When she did she cackled. [ Ha ha ha!] When Cloe notised her piano was gone she cried and cried. Then her friend called Ben nocked on her door. Cloe talled Ben her piano was missing. He felt sorry. So he seddetied to go on a piano hunt. Then they found it . Hurray!
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Hi Muskan
What a brilliant story for this week’s 100WC. You have thought about the plot and there is a clear beginning, middle and end. You have used some interesting vocabulary and I think your green piano sounds fab, well done.