Miriam Lord 100 Word Challenge

Ayesha H 4WS – Week 31

100wc — Wed, 22 May 2013 19:19:23 +0000

One day my magic key lighted up and took me on a adventure to a very strange place it was very sunny day and there was birds tweeting and people walking all over the place there were people in this kind of thing that looks like there is honey in there and there was also lots of busy markets the whioleplace was packed oyut just of people it was really hot and I didnt know what to do because it was that busy and also there was lots of police and ambulance and there was a fire it was disastrios I just felt like I was going to fait I was like somebody please please please help so at the end everything varmed down and know there was bees flying everywhere.

Wadana 3IH – Week 31

100wc — Tue, 21 May 2013 17:25:04 +0000

The sky is as blue as a whale swimming left and right. I hear birds tweeting as they fly by and people talking to one and other. The buildings are tall and wide especially the large hexagon building. As I walk down I smell the fresh air while it blows my hair back. I come near a medium building. I see people eating. I smelled DELICIOUS chicken and imaged me inside the buliding eating it aswell. I walked inside and there were people on computer’s, some were answering calls, some were leaving, some were going out, some were teaching and some were eating aswell as talking. I came to the top floor and saw nature.

100 Word Challenge – Week 31

Mrs Stones — Mon, 20 May 2013 07:59:55 +0000

Well done to all those children who wrote their entries for Week 30 of the 100 Word Challenge. You wrote with great enthusiasm about you’re favourite stories, I think I’ll be giving some of them a go myself. The Miriam Lord Gems will be announced in Celebration Assembly next week.

Now for the next challenge! The prompt this week is a picture. I hope it really gets your imaginations going!

You have 100 words only to produce a creative piece of writing. Really think about the words you choose for your readers. Don’t forget you can include what you hear and smell as well as see. I look forward to reading your entries.

When you have written your work (and counted the words), add it to this blog as a post with your first name and class, not as a comment. We will then link it to the 100 Word Challenge blog. Please see Mrs Stones to learn how to post your own entries.

The prompt is open until Saturday 25th May.

Please also try and take a few minutes to read other children’s entries and leave them a positive comment. Click on this link to read and comment on other children’s entries http://100wc.net

Aamina 5SD – Week 30

100wc — Sat, 18 May 2013 16:10:33 +0000

My favourite book is ‘Big Nate makes the grade’. It’s a comic book with about 6 in the series. These books are about a boy called Nate. He hates his teacher, Mrs Godfrey. She gives him the only grade he deserves: D-. In this book, Nate runs for student government against Gina, the brainiest girl in the year. She’s also the biggest show-off AND teacher’s pet. But as usual, Gina get’s treasurer. This is a a pretty big acheivement, as Gina’s been elected for treasurer for 5 years running! Ntae already knew he wouldn’t stand a chance anyway. That book is brilliant.

Laiba 4WS – Week 30

100wc — Sat, 18 May 2013 16:09:06 +0000

My favourite book is called Midnight for Charlie Bone. It is a very interesting book about a boy called Charlie Bone, who is aged 11. There used to be a Red king and he had 10 children and when his wife died the children left him. All those children had a special talent because the red king is a magician and special. His children are all endowed(talented in something unusual) Charlie is one of those children.Charlie doesn’t want to believe he has a special talent, it means he will be sent to the horrible Bloors academy. Voices from pictures wisper to him of dark secrets from the past.In this book Charlie needs to solve a mystery from what he hears in the pictures,

Iqra 4WS – Week 30

100wc — Sat, 18 May 2013 16:08:46 +0000

David Walliams
Rat Burger

At the end of every shift at the factory he would rush home excitedly, laden with samples of some weird and wonderful new flavour for Zoe to be the first to try. Then he would report back to what she liked to the boss. These were Zoe’s favourites :

Sherbert Bang
Bubblicious Bubblegum
Triple choco- Nut- Fudge Swirl
Candyfloss Supreme
Caramel & Custard
Mango Surprise
Her least favourite was snail and broccoli.

Khateeb 4WS – Week 30

100wc — Sat, 18 May 2013 16:08:19 +0000

My favourite book is Penguin Pandemonium.At the start the boss of the Zoo Big Paulie tells one of the penguins Rory to take care of his children because he was going to a meeting. When Big Paulie went his children were saying readht mes ah boook so then Rory went to his friend called blue and she was a girl and he told her to read a book for the two children. When they were reading the two children went asleep whn suddenly Rory’s friends came and took them away for a skateboard race. When they got back the children were missing and then they went for a rescue.

Taiba 4WS – Week 30

100wc — Sat, 18 May 2013 16:06:45 +0000

Percy Jackson and the Lightning thief is my favourite book because there is an adventure. There is a boy called Percy and his best friend Groover. When Percy arrives at a museum his supply teacher Miss Fig try’s to attack him and get the bolt. He finds out that he is a Greece demigod and moves into a camp. When he gets there his mum turns into dust. Percy sets off to find his mum with help from Groover and a battle girl called Anebeth. They find three pearls from all around the world and set off to the underworld. There Percy saw his uncle and he took the bolt that they did not know it was there. they all stepped on a pearl and set off to the Gods. There they gave the bolt back and also saw Percy’s dad. When he arrived home his stepdad was gone and they all had a happy life until the next adventure.

Haider 4WS – Week 30

100wc — Sat, 18 May 2013 16:06:09 +0000

My favourite book is The blured man.It is about a man he came from Chicago to England.He came to see a man called Lenny Smile but when he arrived to Englaned Lenny died. Then he told 2 people to find out why he died and he showed a picture of him. Then they went to a ceremony for lennys death. Later on one of the children saw a man watching them and he looked familier then he realised it was the man from the picture.He chased after him but he ran away but he never gave up and carryed on. When they was out of the ceremony he asked a old lady”Have you seen a man with a blured face and a hat”. Then the woman replied “Who ever goes in the ceremony never comes out.” After that he saw the man and he ran away.

Ayesha K 4WS – Week 30

100wc — Sat, 18 May 2013 16:05:21 +0000

My favourite book name is Mr Stink. It is my favourite book because I like how it describes the characters and in some parts it is funny. There is this girl named Chloe her mother is really mean to her and her little sister Chloe likes her dad. One day she meats a man sitting on a bench he smells through the story she helps him. It is written by David wallians and illustrated by Quentin Blake he draws very good. In the story Chloe mum wants to be a presedent but Mr Stink turns out to be famous in the morning everybody is standing out with camera’s and they are taking photos.