The Gems will be interesting pieces of writing, where we can see you have tried your best and stretched your learning muscles.
Week 25 Gems
One day I went to by a normal chocolate bar. One the packet it said win a ticket to the world biggest chocolate factory.I had actualy won the golden ticket! It was on a weekend and I could only bring one person. I decided to choose my mum. When I enterd it it was huge I could not belive my eyes. Looking at all that choclate made me want to live in that chocolate factory. My mum said ” the owner of the factory said we can taste some of the chocolate.” Then finaly we reached the end of the factory and the man gave us all some chocolate. I said to myself I wish i could go to the chocolte factory again.
By Iqra 4WS
One summer day, the light shade of blue in the sky faded away creating grey clouds. The sun disappeared as the rain drops slowly fell. However, Ben didn’t care about the weather as all he wanted to do was go out with his friends. Although, Ben thought he had true friends they were just using him to get more popular at school. They decided to get him into lots of trouble to ruin his reputation. At 4:00 after school they went to the corner shop as they were hungry and saw beautiful chocolate. As they didn’t have money they told Ben to steal it! Looking at all that chocolate Ben thought to himself……What shall I do?
By Anisa 6JC
Week 26 Gems
“DAD!!! can I watch space rockets launch into space” asked Jack “Well yes” replied Jack’s father. Jack switched the tv on and saw space rockets WOW!!! he starts wondering what it will be like to go to space. “Were going to launch in 5,4,3,2,1, blast off!” Jack screamed. Jack was heading for melty Mars and landed safely “YES!!!” he shouted. Jack brought some food along and he took with him and started exploring Mars. Jack got the food and started eating and a alien came past and also started eating too so they both had a picnic. Jack suddenly woke up and thought he will be an astronaut when he grows up.
By Awais 5MB
Alex’s was going to space. Has he was flying his fuel finnished and crashed on the moon. He became scared and lonley, until he met a alien. “Hello there” she said. “Welcome to the moon.”
Alex became scared and stepped back. He tried to run but he just started to fly. “AHHH!!” Screamed Alex. They alien grabbed him and put him down. She gave him a drink so he could breath. The alien gave him some food. Then he helped to build they roket so he could go to Earth again. After they had made it Alex thanked her and sent off home.
By Wadana 3IH
Week 27 Gems
One morning I woke up and then I got hit but I couldn’t see it and fell asleep for 2 mnutes I woke up with me in the jungle. I hated wild life so I ran away screaming “HELP!. Suddenly I saw a wizard and the wizard said “there are tanks in this jungle and the green shoots could just be seen in a dark cave up in the mountains and if you press the button you will get transported home safely I ran away and climbed up a mountain. I found a green tank I remembered how to jump so far when I was in the gymnastics club that I went 2 weeks ago. I jumped over the tank and it tried to shoot me but it missed. I pressed the button and I got transported home.
By Ihsaan 4WS
One day years ago I went to a greenhouse festival. We got an invitation just like everyone elses just not sure who it was from. Since it did not have a signature. We phoned all of our relatives but no one knew who it was from. They were all as curious and baffled as us. Everyone went not knowing just thinking. When we got to the greenhouse there was just a bunch of our relatives. Just then miraculously some soil was sprinkled into a pot by no one it just happened. After that there appeared a hole in the soil and a seed in the hole and water sprinkled on to . The green shoots could just be seen poking out of the soil . Who did it nobody knows even to this day.
By Ummayyah 5SD
Week 28 Gems
How are you? My sisters have been anoying me. I was depressed about them. Upstairs in my room I stepped inside it and something strange happened. Shall I tell you what it was? Well inside the wardrobe was a magical entrance that takes you to a very dark place. I didn’t know what it is was then. So I stepped inside it and I fell down. Everything was dark. The noise was deafening. Shall I tell you about how I got out? I found this rusty door which takes you back. It took me back. Well Grandma would you like to visit my house any time?
Love from your daughter Susan.
By Ifat 4WS
SHUT UP! Screached Miss Molly, while the noise was deafening by the lazy children. Miss Molly was fed up and she had a bad headake but there was one chil who was lazy she was a bright child who always listend and always helped other children. Everyone was jealous of her. Suddently they started to get on with their work and started to be bright children that would show everyone that they are a star at learning but Miss Molly didn’t realise them days. One day Miss Molly was marking their work and she saw good work and she wanted to take a picture of them and put them on newspaper to show the world that they have proved that they could learn.
By Ruqayyah 4HL
Week 29 Gems
I hated my parent’s as they kicked me out of the car and scooted of. They dropped me of at summer camp while they went on holiday. Suddenly I felt the pain in my arm as I was rubbing it hard. A plump lady with a tight belt around her waist. Said ”I suppose you should come in to “. I followed her in as she showed me my dormitree. She saw my arm and said what happened ? I hurt it I started to exxaugerate and I saw all the other children gasp. I said I was at the top of the mountain but then I heard a creak. I clung on to the icy mountain my arm got stuck in the tree and I fell with the heavy branch on top of me.
By Sarah 6DY
One gusty autumns day, when leaves were scattering everywhere, I was at home deciding weather to get some fresh air or not. It took me a few minutes but I eventually did it in the end. When I went outside I saw some gold and silver coins that were bowling down the alley. I picked one up, it had some dust on it so I rubbed it to see what the dust was covering. It had a cover with a picture of me!! I was very anxious but very curious too, so I took the cover of and under it was a marble stone that said it had magical powers. Suddenly something tripped me over and I landed on my arm. Suddenly the pain of my arm was getting worse. I remembered the marble stone that had magical powers so guess what I did.
By Laiba 4WS