Fantasy story 100 words

 

The mighty monkey

In Australia where a towering, disintegrating and shivering tree stood, lived the most extraordinary talking monkey. He could climb the tallest tree as fast as a cheetah in the wild, trying to catch its prey. One evening as the sun faded away, the monkey was stolen from his ┬áhabitat. “Oh no” whispered the terrified monkey. All the monkey could do was wait until the car stopped. Three days later the monkey arrived in a zoo, but the biggest problem was he was now in Africa. The talented monkey dashed to a helicopter, pushed the pilot out and flew home safely.

Giuseppe

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12 comments on “Fantasy story 100 words

  1. Holly on said:

    Very good! Good vocbaulary!
    Holly

  2. pupil on said:

    Wowsa! Amazing adjectives!

    Martha

  3. pupil on said:

    cool

    wiktoria

  4. pupil on said:

    It is a very good story with some amazing words with a majorety of humor, I like!;)

  5. Anonymous on said:

    Amasing story i lovve it is set in australia and i love monkys

    year 5 Angelina

  6. Anonymous on said:

    Well done! I love monkeys!!!

  7. Anonymous on said:

    your story about the mighty monkey has powerful WOW Words.
    it also has good punctuation. john year 5f group A

  8. Anonymous on said:

    LOVED IT COOL :)

  9. Anonymous on said:

    cool story i liked it
    victoria :)

  10. Anonymous on said:

    Cool story, I liked it.
    Victoria :)

  11. pupil on said:

    :) very good

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